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“In the Arboretum” by Andrew Hudgins

As a lowering snowstorm
silk-screened the arboretum
into a gauzy tomb
around an ecosystem
of stalled summer in late autumn
(a terrarium’s hot sanctum
inside a snow globe), steam
vagued the coin-pocked stream,
another closed system,
and I slid along the stem
of a tropical leaf a thumb
still frigid, slow to accustom
myself to the wispy steam
drifting like a phantom
through the rich spectrum
of greenery, each item
doomed outside the sanctum,
where alien yet tame
verdure thrives because it’s tame.
Inside: one desideratum.
Outside, let’s imagine: time
and the obscuring storm.
In a breath or two, I’ll join them,
fingering a green stem,
a pinched and withering victim
that is, a card states, false thyme.

(From The Atlantic Monthly, January/February 2008)

NOTE FROM HARRISON: This poem illustrates an unconventional kind of rhyme called “end-rhyme,” where the last consonant sound is the same throughout.  For those who say they only like rhyming poems, this one counts.

7 Comments to “Friday poem”

  1. It definitely counts! I like this very much!

  2. 2. Gravatar by Harris 02.08.08 at 9:08 am

    And talk about a great pun at the end.

    Yes, this is a very fine poem.

  3. 3. Gravatar by janie 02.08.08 at 9:28 am

    I love the scenes it brings to mind for me.

  4. Desideratum. Something needed and wanted.

    Desiderata - Something on a desideratum list.

    Use:

    OK honey, lets go to bed and cross that desiderata off the the desideratum list and kill two poems at one time.

  5. 5. Gravatar by John M. 02.08.08 at 2:14 pm

    A greenhouse covered in snow. Nice image.

  6. I like the imagery and the pun at the end.

    The line ends seem a bit forced in places and monotonous.

  7. Not a bad poem, but I would think that since you posted an interview by the current poet laureate you would post on of his poems today.